Excellent animation, poor sound/spelling
The good: your animation style is excellent. You handled a serious topic in a serious and entertaining way. Very haunting images. The song is a perfect complement to a very disturbing story - an excellent choice to set the mood.
The bad: While the main theme song is great and fits well, the weird breathing/sound effect things sound very amateurish and are very distracting/annoying. Also, if you're going to have a text-heavy flash, you must do a better job of spell-checking before submitting content. Spelling the word "loading" with two g's on the opening screen is inexcusable.
Very well done flash, but some increased attention to detail will make it flawless. Good work.