Score: 10

"FLAWLESS"

submission: Animator vs. Animation II

date: March 21, 2007

Dude, this is going on my favorites, and I'm gonna check out all the rest of your stuff. Excellent work, very well thought out and clever. Great animation work, sound effects, humor, etc. Nothing negative to criticize at all.

<|> TritoneAngel

Score: 10

"The Penguin Empire Strikes Back"

submission: To Kick a Penguin

date: March 11, 2007

That was adorable. And viewers learned some valuable lessons:

1 - how to determine the volume of a sphere
2 - what happens when you piss off an army of angry penguins

Constructive criticism: the sound was a little grainy and could have used a little cleaning up, particularly for some points during the battle sequence. The snowball impact on the kid's face could have had a better sound to it.

Otherwise, perfect.

<|>Tritoneangel<|>

Score: 10

"DUDE"

submission: Monarch

date: March 5, 2007

That was excellent -- the pencil style really adds to the dreamlike feel, and the haunting music is perfectly suited to the flash. Great work.

I agree with the last reviewer - the cow eating machine of doom is the scariest part.

Score: 10

"Awesome"

submission: Chains of Ocean and Flame+*~.0

date: August 4, 2009

Great work dude. Things composed by people named Shawn are always great. :)

Score: 8

"Very cool, but needs more variety"

submission: Mind The Gap -ADJ-

date: December 17, 2008

Very cool and bouncy tune; good use of an odd time without making the piece feel too unusual or offbeat--you made it fit very well and made it feel natural. Nice instrumentation and a good deep mix between the instruments. Solid recording quality. My only critique would be that the piece could use better development; the track feels repetitive at times.

Score: 9

"Excellent!"

submission: Blacklight Grudge

date: December 15, 2008

Dude, this is an excellent piece. Great structure, great buildup, and stellar recording quality. Perfect mix of the instruments as well; song tells a story in a way that good songs ought to.

The solo sounds a bit choppy, and does have a few notes that are a little out there, but that's really a nitpick. Felt like I had to work extra hard to find something I didn't like in this piece. This is something I'll be soloing over at home for fun.